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Post by Pyro on Dec 19, 2005 15:42:06 GMT -5
We need ideas for the plot, and post them here. The creator of the plot we choose will recieve 200favor (karma), thus giving them special powers.
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September ‡
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Post by September ‡ on Dec 19, 2005 15:50:12 GMT -5
[posting it on another post]
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Post by Pyro on Dec 19, 2005 15:50:51 GMT -5
Okay.
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Shifre
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Air Mare of Echo
I wanna steal your attention like a bad outlaw....
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Post by Shifre on Dec 19, 2005 20:30:12 GMT -5
oh ill enter can it hold any new like surprises to be found on 'quines adventures?
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Post by Pyro on Dec 19, 2005 20:39:22 GMT -5
Yes. You can do basically anything. Mythical creatures, ghosts, (exc)
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Altair
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Post by Altair on Dec 20, 2005 10:26:00 GMT -5
At the center of the Klahia Grove there is an ancient tree, it's branches ongoing to stretch to the sky, its heights unknown. Many have stopped to wonder, and stare in awe, but none know the true meaning of it.. except for Gaia.
Somewhere in the sands of the Ahmad Desert there is an ancient decree, created when the immortal spirits came into existence, but Pyro is the only one to know where it is.
Carried along the winds that blow through the Wind region is a large secret..
And lastly, lost in the depths of the ocean that fringes Indira is something once great, now lost. Hydro is the only one to know where or what it is.
Many have quested to find these mysteries.. all but one have failed... Centuries ago a potent and favored air mare had heard the secret on the wind. It was so tremendous and powerful that she the balance of life and the mare died. She is known as the Whisperer. Her true name was forgotten a long time ago. The Whisperer often appears as a ghost-mare, always with something urgent to tell, but her words are always swept away on a sharp gust of wind.. The secret is alike, but in different forms... who will be next to find?
ooc: lol okay, I don't even know the secret. Maybe I'll figure it out later. What do you think?
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Zodiac
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Bachelor Stallion
Ill speak to you in a voice you have never heard....
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Post by Zodiac on Dec 20, 2005 11:06:02 GMT -5
OOC: im gonna add onto yours Altair!
Many 'quines lived her but then they all vanished. As soon as they disappeared signs of new life then started to grow and royal gods came and watched o'er the remaining land. Years past by and then some lucky 'quines came to find many secrets that romaed deep within Frozen In A Dreams depths.
one was of a great tree that had many vines, branches, leaves that glowed diffrent colors, and none could estimate or percisly tell how tall it was. This tree was of Gaias and found in Klahia Forest. Only Gaia has discoverd what its true power is. What we dont know is of good or evil.
Trvaling thousands of miles across Ahmad Desert there is a royal tomb that has been now discoverd but was once burried deep with miles of sand. It has been known to hold many secrets about the old immortals and why they all had vanished. Sometimes writting on the walls show better then others.
Winds that blow through the wind region have many secrets of a novel to tell. Us 'quines can not understand d their howling cries. Aero the wind queen will soon puzzle together its mystery and bring it into place with the rest.
Indira its water a warm and glowing thus they bring lots of merine life to thus realm. Sweeping the beach back millions of years ago with water hydro did but within in this he meadled with a great secret and now it is found deep within the oceans dark ocean floor. No 'quine has been able to travle down into the water yet pass it dark mask.
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Post by Pyro on Dec 20, 2005 11:11:32 GMT -5
'Aero the wind lord' Aero is actually a lady, but that's okay.
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Zodiac
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Bachelor Stallion
Ill speak to you in a voice you have never heard....
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Post by Zodiac on Dec 20, 2005 11:14:53 GMT -5
i changed it soz bout that! home sick today with pemonia
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Post by Pyro on Dec 20, 2005 11:20:47 GMT -5
It's fine.
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September ‡
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Post by September ‡ on Dec 20, 2005 18:36:06 GMT -5
-x\. Frozen~Dream ./x-
Frozen Dream, an anicent place with many secrets in store. Of course, before there was Pyro, Hydro, Aero, and Gaia, there was a supreme ruler. Beautiful and black Pangea, that was her name. Yes, a her. She was a bewitched mare, clever and powerful. She had lived in Frozen Dream a long time, tending to the four types of regions. But soon, she realized she couldn't live forever. Pangea, a master of fire, water, air, and earth, took a few days to make four new rulers for her homeland. On the first day, she brought many flames together and created Pyro. She perfected him by giving him emotions and chestnut looks. Pleased, she continued with the three other elements. Water was brought from the shores of Indira and the basin in Astarte and mixed together and put into the form of a horse. This became Hydro. He was a handsome blue roan stallion, given the same emotions as Pyro. Next came along Aero, who was made of strong air currents. She was a pure white mare, made almost in the same exact form as Pangea herself. Pleased with the mare she had created, Pangea decided to make the last element a mare. The vines and dirt formed a bay mare by the name of Gaia. But still, something was missing. Darkness, she made a pinto stallion for that. Dark, he was called. Dark explained his entire personality... Now, her job was finished. By now, her lifespan was nearly ending. But Pangea wasn't done instructing her new creations. Pyro, you are the ruler over fire. Use your gift well. Hydro, you are the lord over water. Do the same. And you, Dark, give our future residents shade and control the day and night. She turned to the mares, more soft in her instructions. Aero, you shall be my lady over air. Protect the airstreams and give the future residents safe oxygen. Gaia, my dear, you shall be the lady of Earth. Feed the future residents with sweet, crisp grass. There was one thing Pangea had forgotten. There was a flaw in Dark though. He was purely evil and murdered Pangea that night. Pyro and Hydro found her first, seeing Dark there with her crimson blood on his white lips, a grin on his muzzle. I did it. I killed our almighty. Furious, the two blood brothers attacked him. Dark was murdered alongside their mother, almighty Pangea. Gaia and Aero had been experiencing themselves with elements at the time and came upon the sight. Poor Aero screamed in horror, galloping in her fifth gait away from the area. Gaia stayed, preparing to bury Pangea and Dark. Hydro and Pyro helped her bore the two large holes, her element coming in handy. By nightfall, both horses were buried beneath the ground. Aero had regained herself and came back to say prayers. They left, trying not to remember. But they couldn't forget. As they departed, a thin silver sprout grew from Pangea's grave. It grew into a large and beautiful flower, glowing in the moonlight. From Dark's grave came a blood red sprout, growing into a heavily thorned black rose. It died within an hour, crawling back into the grave. Pangea's flourished, taking form of the mare's body. Her ghost appeared from the silver flower, running out from her grave. She was craving for revenge, completely crazy in her ways. It was all because of Dark.
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It has been years and years since that time. Unexpected deaths happened in many herds, cases of still-born foals and miscarriages, as well as stumbling upon what looked like a sleeping body, but was dead. It was all the work of Pangea. She was completely deranged, becoming more every year. No one is exactly sure of where she is, where she roams. To those who have been close to those who have died have told rumors of the famous ghost Pangea, that she was the mother of the four rulers. It was all true, but none believed. Were they too afraid to believe? That hasn't been confirmed. There was a mass plague of dying in one year, frightening the land into hibernation. No one came into Frozen Dream. Absolutely no one. Pyro remained in the Ahmad Desert, waiting patiently. Hydro disappeared in the Misted Valley, hidden from the world. Aero ran with the wind constantly, avoiding Frozen Dream completely. Gaia rested herself in a hollow tree in the Klahia Grove. It was silent for so long... Too silent. Pangea appeared, too caring to kill her own creations, too afraid to venture outside of her murder site. She searched and searched for her creations, calling their names desperately. But they didn't hear her. Pyro heard a faint whispering on the wind and only curled himself into the sand, trying to ignore it. Aero heard nothing, being far away. Gaia was covered with her vines, unable to do anything. Hydro was good at ignoring things. Angry once more, Pangea sought them out. She found Pyro in his sand burrow, Gaia in her tree, Aero on a western wind current, and Hydro in the Valley. She brought them together, gazing at her aged creations. My dears... Her voice was cracked and squeaky but she didn't seem to notice. Aero and Gaia were appalled by the ghost but were rooted to the spot. Hydro and Pyro didn't give eye contact. I apologize. For my behavior. She moved her mouth oddly, unadjusted to using words. It was you...? Aero asked tentatively, curious. Pangea nodded. Pyro made a grunting sound, meaning he was not pleased. Hydro stayed silent, along with Gaia. It was too horrible for words. Pangea was disgusted. None of her creations gave her sympathy. They didn't tell her to stop. They didn't care. Oh? They didn't care? Fine. She spat, eyes narrowed. She dematerialized into the unknown. The four looked to one another. What do we do? Aero asked pointedly. Sit and pray she doesn't harm anyone else. Gaia replied softly, staring at the spot Pangea had just been. This isn't good. Pyro added, shrugging. Hydro looked fearful. Not good at all! He agreed. What will happen if she kills more horses? No one will live here at all! He paced, shaken. Pyro snorted. We lie. We lie to them, tell them it's okay. He suggested. Gaia looked surprised at this. Oh? Lie? What if they find out? Pyro raised a brow. They won't, Gaia. Trust me, they won't.
-x~x-
The Plot Pangea is out to kill. Who will be her next victim? Who can stop her?
Major Characters Pangea, Pyro, Hydro, Aero, Gaia
Needed Player for Pangea (auditions, perhaps)
I hope this makes sense... I've always loved gruesome plots. -grins- [/sup]
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Post by Pyro on Dec 20, 2005 20:43:22 GMT -5
ooc: Pretty good everyone. So we don't have to just say 'Frozen Dream' (because that doesn't sound like a name of a land to me) I'll come up with a name for this place. -thinks hard- -lightbulb above head- How about Thanos!? (I'll leave this contest up until the 26th, a week since it started so everyone has a chance to enter)
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Post by Pyro on Dec 26, 2005 11:48:00 GMT -5
CONTEST CLOSED Everyone gets a portion of the prize, because I'm going to use a little bit from everything to make one plot. I'll have the plot up hopefully later today. Here is how the prize will be split:
Sept: 100favor for the original idea of Pangea (Not like you need it, but you earned it.) Altair: 70favor for the original idea of the mysteries (They will be used in the plot) Zodiac: 30favor for elaborating Altair's idea.
Any objections?
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September ‡
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Post by September ‡ on Dec 26, 2005 11:50:31 GMT -5
this'll be an awesome plot. I can tell. -shakes Altair's and Zodiac's hands- you guys made up some really good stuff. n.n
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Post by Pyro on Dec 26, 2005 11:57:07 GMT -5
-claps everyone on back- Good job! Anyways, here is what you can do with your favor: (lol, all people who entered are water)
Sept: You have a larger amount of favor, and can call up a small stream Altair: You have a small amount of favor, and can cause a large pool to well up in front of you. Zodiac: You have a very small amount of favor, and can call up a drop of water (lol just kidding) You can make a small pool.
For now everyone can only do these minimal things, but as you progress your favor will grow and you will be able to do larger things, such as attacks with water and the like.
Any objections?
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